The Daily Fret; Stanza 5
Points of View
Points of View
Words running,
Did often slip,
And in chasms,
Did endless get;
Lost some say,
But rather glib,
i found their jeer,
And grin with it.
And smugly too,
Like polished nibs,
Gleamed the ink,
Of life they writ;
With blood so blue,
That once dipped,
All seas and skies,
Immersed in it.
But some said,
Were troubled bits;
For eyes weak,
Were bound to flit-
To horizons lines,
To quickly fit,
The points of views,
That came to sit;
That blurry sight,
In half jest and wit,
Said twinkled stars,
By just being lit…
6 comments:
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nothing to fret about?!
strange! ;P
Megha...just when i was wondering if anyone ever saw this page...
Actually had a lot to fret...my internet kaboomed last nite givin rise to this singularly wordless fret... but now its bak.. ;)
i like this one_ a lot!!! :)
People have their own point of views.
Don't bother. Keep writing!!!
It's a very self-centred pursuit.
And the best when selfish .:P
@Gunveen ... its brilliant ... thank you ... hope you aren't too tired of that word ... that is the ultimate word for me in describing someone's creativity and talent ... loved it ...:-)) ...( hope i am able to post this ... this site wants me to prove that i am not a robot by typing two other words ) ... how do i tell them that i know only one ... :-))
Megha...quite true, your words are prophetically soothing... :) thx...
Cheenu sir, much as i hate nudging you out of your comfort zone i wud like to thank you for your wishes more.. :)
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